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Morgan wip 3 by *drafterx:icondrafterx:

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©2004-2009 *drafterx
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Ok, this isnt make fun of Erica day because i know the more i work on this piece, the less it looks like the ref. pic. haha, ive kinda given up on the ref. pic and did it my own way. the neck didnt look right at all when i did it like the one in the ref. pic for various reasons, just because i made the poll and crest too broad, so with a neck like that hed look like a fat giraffe. So, thats why the neck is still, eh...took me 10 min just looking at it and trial and error in picking something. Still a lot to do, ill probably have to finish it tomm. That one eye looks like a fish eye, gonna have to go and tweak that. So, lightly critique it to where i dont have to do any major altering. Thanks guys.

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!zhavas Dec 16, 2004, 8:54:14 AM
the eyes are way off, I suggest you start over without the ref and use this as an example

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*drafterx Dec 16, 2004, 8:57:26 AM
sorry, i cant do that. I know i need to fix that left one, but other than that they are fine. Thanks for trying to help, though. Your suggestion is useless.

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~mistytwilight Dec 16, 2004, 9:07:05 AM
I know you're not finished, but the forelock looks kinda stringy to me. Also, the ears are kinda stubby. But that's just my opinion. The top lip looks too long and it overlaps the bottom too far too. Other than a few little things, it looks great. Keep up the good work!

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*drafterx Dec 16, 2004, 9:09:57 AM
Yeah, ill touch up on the forelock and what little mane he has. As far as the lip goes, it may seem like that but if you look at the ref. pic, his lip is like that. maybe he's relaxed or whatnot, but there i was drawing to the ref. pic. Also, morgan ears tend to have a reputation of being smallish and quite stubbish, so we'll let that pass for now ;) thanks for the tips girl :D

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~mistytwilight Dec 16, 2004, 9:25:23 AM
No problem!~I forgive you if it was on the ref pic ;P

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~Estelart Dec 16, 2004, 11:54:59 AM
It looks gorgeous, however I think the nostral pointing away is bigger then the other one.

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~Tweakster Dec 16, 2004, 1:59:31 PM
Good job, I like this. I was gonna say that yeah, Morgan ears are stubbier.. and the lip is fine to me, my gelding's lip does that alot when he's relaxed. The only thing I see is the forelock is a tad stringy, kind of unnatural looking. And the nostril, but thats not a big deal. Good job :D

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~shadow-nightmare Dec 16, 2004, 3:46:42 PM
im not going to critique for this pic is looking awesome! the shading, is looking better and better, ive seen ur reference pic and ur right the lips are like that and the ears, totaly natural for a correct morgan. and in the pic the morgan had great conformation.
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*drafterx Dec 16, 2004, 5:07:28 PM
aww, yay. Encpuragement to boost my esteem! Thanks hun, haha. So the shading looks ok? Im still not sure on where i stand on this point. the more critique i get, the more i hate it. Thanks for the nice comment ;)

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*drafterx Dec 16, 2004, 5:08:25 PM
yeah, the forelock was just something i threw there so it wouldnt look toally alienanic. Ill def. go and touch that up, along with that nostril. thank you!! :D

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